Janitorial Worker

[just mercedes]

Hi Dale - your idea is strong but it just didn't follow through. Maybe it's because the three lines give three images, but there's no Aha! moment where they tilt, or change, at least, not for me. I played with

old woman
slowly mopping floor -
ceiling crumbles

but that felt kind of slapstick, where you want to tell a sad story about life. Or the end of it, anyway. Don't give up - keep going!