Janitorial Worker

[milo]

Really? I didn't know adjectives could read at all.
Yes it would be interesting to see a musty woman, although I don't know how one would do that. 

Unless she is a ghost or invisible I don't know why you would have difficulty seeing her. Perhaps the narrator is Homer?

I think maybe it would be difficult seeing her because "musty" is something one can smell, not something one can see.

does it render people invisible?  Is this a poem of synesthaesia?

"grey-haired mop" is perhaps the most interesting thing I have come across in the poem, or rather possible combination. How you use it (or not) is up to you, it is your poem. For the most part, I think you are leaning too much on your adjectives which is probably why someone suggested switching to "crone" - not because it would be good, per se, bu because the poem leans ineffectively on its crop of adjectives.