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(11-22-2014, 07:09 PM)azure Wrote:  
(11-22-2014, 03:12 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Buffalo
shoulder deep
in snow

Tongue
I found this to be humorous, imagining a buffalo freezing to death in the snow... Something about the creature's immobility makes me chuckle.  Cool  
No disrespect intended unless due, but I always have consummate difficuly determing whether this sort of stuff is a piss take....and that is not good, either way.

Your lack of punctation is , however, quite unforgivable. Punctate to clarity otherwise:

Buffalo. Shoulder deep in snow.
Or:

Buffalo shoulder...deep in snow.

Or, that well known canyon of fifties Cowboys and Indian films, Buffalo Shoulder:

Buffalo Shoulder, deep in snow.

But overall,
who gives
a damn.

Make something out of that...and I am a personal friend of Mr. Overall Who, so be warned.
Best,
tectak
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Messages In This Thread
11-21 - by Tiger the Lion - 11-22-2014, 03:12 PM
RE: 11-21 - by azure - 11-22-2014, 07:09 PM
RE: 11-21 - by tectak - 11-23-2014, 12:17 AM
RE: 11-21 - by cidermaid - 11-23-2014, 07:35 PM
RE: 11-21 - by Erthona - 11-23-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: 11-21 - by Brownlie - 11-24-2014, 03:13 AM
RE: 11-21 - by Tiger the Lion - 11-24-2014, 08:08 AM
RE: 11-21 - by srijantje - 11-24-2014, 07:05 PM
RE: 11-21 - by billy - 11-24-2014, 07:22 PM



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