Pessimistic Sonnet
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Yes it was for fun, and I probably should not have done a critique. I did so because I couldn't figure out what was suppose to be funny, and so you could help me see how it was funny, not really for the purpose of a critique. I got a little overboard though, sorry.

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Pessimistic Sonnet - by Brownlie - 11-16-2014, 06:03 PM
RE: Pessimistic Sonnet - by Erthona - 11-18-2014, 10:38 AM
RE: Pessimistic Sonnet - by Brownlie - 11-18-2014, 04:07 PM
RE: Pessimistic Sonnet - by Erthona - 11-21-2014, 04:35 AM



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