Demons dance in a blood-red sky
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The switch from hocus pocus to flanders fields won me over. I much prefer poems with some sense of structure though, personal opinion, so I enjoyed that much - enjoyable read overall & good command of language in general i.e. the metaphors and plays on words. Keep writing.
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Demons dance in a blood-red sky - by nb - 11-18-2014, 05:58 AM
RE: Demons dance in a blood-red sky - by ellajam - 11-18-2014, 08:18 AM
RE: Demons dance in a blood-red sky - by PurpleFluff - 11-18-2014, 01:53 PM
RE: Demons dance in a blood-red sky - by nb - 11-19-2014, 03:27 AM
RE: Demons dance in a blood-red sky - by billy - 11-19-2014, 07:09 PM
RE: Demons dance in a blood-red sky - by Filíocht - 11-21-2014, 03:04 AM
RE: Demons dance in a blood-red sky - by Isaias - 11-23-2014, 03:43 AM
RE: Demons dance in a blood-red sky - by zahrakh - 11-23-2014, 03:57 AM
RE: Demons dance in a blood-red sky - by nb - 11-23-2014, 03:28 PM
RE: Demons dance in a blood-red sky - by Brownlie - 11-23-2014, 05:51 PM



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