11-21-2014, 02:36 AM
"we measured every element
down to your iron core we scanned"
I like these 2 lines a lot, nice and vigorous, and also the earthy imagery throughout worked well. I also found the poem quite subtle if I may say so, a delicate message wrapped in iron.
down to your iron core we scanned"
I like these 2 lines a lot, nice and vigorous, and also the earthy imagery throughout worked well. I also found the poem quite subtle if I may say so, a delicate message wrapped in iron.