Viscous 11-11

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Viscous 11-11

AronVanSciver
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11-19-2014, 04:56 AM

I love how quick and concise this poem is. It's like the slaughter itself. The poem bashes and pounds my head. But would blood get thicker as it evaporated into the sky or got dissolved in water? Kind of seems like the opposite would happen.

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Viscous 11-11 - by Tiger the Lion - 11-12-2014, 09:19 AM

RE: Viscous 11-11 - by tectak - 11-18-2014, 05:07 PM

RE: Viscous 11-11 - by Brownlie - 11-18-2014, 05:35 PM

RE: Viscous 11-11 - by AronVanSciver - 11-19-2014, 04:56 AM

RE: Viscous 11-11 - by vagabond - 11-19-2014, 05:47 AM

RE: Viscous 11-11 - by azure - 11-19-2014, 04:00 PM

RE: Viscous 11-11 - by billy - 11-19-2014, 06:07 PM

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