Mwaba Don

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She moves fluidly on a circular stage.
Her style flawless,
she becomes the sparkle as the audience fades.
Slowly I become attractively restless
as my fear of expression wanes.
I have to hold on to this moment of moving beauty.
I cannot afford to darkle,
So I hold my breath to soundly watch the beautiful dancer.
She is so beautiful and feminine
yet I seem to capture the masculine execution of her dance,
she is a Perfect Muse, expressing her poetry in Dance

You seem to be making progress poetically. I had a few issues with this one:

She moves fluidly on a circular stage.
Her style flawless, I like the brevity of this line
she becomes the sparkle as the audience fades. I think you should replace sparkle with another suitable word
Slowly I become attractively restless The attention suddenly turns to you? If you are going to do that, express it in language that is less confusing.
as my fear of expression wanes. expressing what? your attraction to the dancer and her beauty? Be clearer.
I have to hold on to this moment of moving beauty. I think you can re word this line and make it shorter and more expressive.
I cannot afford to darkle, This word made me Lol, interesting...
So I hold my breath to soundly watch the beautiful dancer. I don't think the word 'soundly' fits here...
She is so beautiful and feminine this is cliched
yet I seem to capture the masculine execution of her dance, I don't think this line is nesscary and it draws my attention away from the dancer.
she is a Perfect Muse, expressing her poetry in Dance

Azure