Viscous 11-11

[Brownlie]

Viscous

 
 
The world was sickening, when
duty called for giant men
knowing blood was thinner than slaughter
 
to ensure its thickening, by
evaporating into sky,
or dissolving into water.
 
It's harder to remember
in viscous times.

Actually, poetry can be pretty weird, but still cool. I would not out right disagree with Tec because he probably makes good point. However, your last line is interesting and you play with thinness and thickness. I'm not sure if you necessarily know what you're doing though. See flarf, and report back damnit. The giant General is suffocating up there in space!