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[SimikPK]

with each breath
a multitude of doves
violent and desolate I would ommit this line. If you really think of it, a mealstrom is both violent and desolate, or at least relates to it
like the maelstroms
of silent genocides. not really sure what silent genocide is.. i can´t think of one.. even if drugs, at least the dying scream or delude somehow.. and if a genocide, someone must scream.

Careful about ambiguity and vagueness.

Simon