Roles & Resentment

[Heyyous]

                                       Roles & Resentment

creeps, creeps everywhere
populating the underworld.
A society of executioners with no victims
judges them.
Security is a victimless crime.
creeps everywhere! pathetic monsters,
losers with no sense of pride
where pride isn't given;
everyone abides by a law of consent.
Those who mock and sneer are the most insecure of all.
No one should be cowed under those eyes;
better to soil your pants or rape a twelve year old in public could you please change this it's good
] but that sort of graphic is just so wrong.
than fall prey to insecure vultures.
Laughter, creeps, creeps and laughter!
As pleasure is inverted guilt,
anyone having a good day
is living at someone else's expense.

I thought the poem was awesome and I have read it a couple times. Anytime I went to change something it threw something out of whack which was really cool. However I can see that one part being offensive or damaging to some people. I think you could find a much more suitable and thought provoking image then that.
How about: Watch a man die in cold blood.