Poles
#12
not sure about the penultimate line (would blubber be better on the line above?) but it's a clever little piece showing that life in general can be pretty hard going.

(11-04-2014, 12:07 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Poles
Sorry about the state of the igloo;
it's been a polar bear of a day great line, and extends the original metaphore
and I am cold.
 
I've managed to scrape
blubber to burn through the night
if we can find a spark.
Reply


Messages In This Thread
Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-04-2014, 12:07 PM
RE: Poles - by Requiem - 11-05-2014, 09:11 AM
RE: Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-05-2014, 12:28 PM
RE: Poles - by SimikPK - 11-05-2014, 06:16 PM
RE: Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-06-2014, 04:51 AM
RE: Poles - by SimikPK - 11-06-2014, 05:09 AM
RE: Poles - by spacecoaster - 11-06-2014, 05:51 AM
RE: Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-06-2014, 10:53 AM
RE: Poles - by donbouquet - 11-11-2014, 08:38 AM
RE: Poles - by justcloudy - 11-11-2014, 09:39 AM
RE: Poles - by azure - 11-15-2014, 01:31 PM
RE: Poles - by billy - 11-15-2014, 06:12 PM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!