11-15-2014, 01:56 PM
First Edit
with each breath
a multitude of doves
like the maelstroms
of forgotten genocides.
Original
with each breath
a multitude of doves
violent and desolate
like the maelstroms
of silent genocides.
with each breath
a multitude of doves
like the maelstroms
of forgotten genocides.
Original
with each breath
a multitude of doves
violent and desolate
like the maelstroms
of silent genocides.
cliche my forte
