11-15-2014, 01:31 PM
(11-04-2014, 12:07 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: PolesI enjoyed the whimsical tone in this piece. The images it conjured in my mind were fresh, so thanks for that. The last stanza was really inviting.
Sorry about the state of the igloo;
it's been a polar bear of a day
and I am cold.
I've managed to scrape
blubber to burn through the night
if we can find a spark.
The only issue I have is with L6. I just think it could possibly be shortened or reworded to make it more... I dunno, savory? At any rate, I liked it.
Azure
cliche my forte

