11-15-2014, 11:48 AM
Thank you gals for critiquing. I will take these helpful suggestions into consideration as I edit. Will have that done soon. As for a recovering Christian, kind of? Tried being a good little Baptist when I was a wee one. Wasn't for me in the end. Actually this poem half about an experience I had, and half inspired by Nine Inch Nails song Reptile. Here's the url to that song if interested. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sfhkXxmnYHc
cliche my forte
