This is a pleasant (though not for Robin) poem that would be greatly enhanced with a bit of attention to the meter. For example:
(11-15-2014, 07:19 AM)paranoid marvin Wrote: The Sheriff at last had succeeded
In catching the Man in the Hood
The trial was a foregone conclusion -- remove 'was'
Now Nottingham wanted his blood -- I'd suggest substituting 'when' for 'now', since Nottingham always wanted his blood
But Robin was no common villain
A fellow who never lost hope
The outlaw once more found a loophole -- a colon here
But this time at the end of a rope -- remove 'but'
It could be worse
