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(11-12-2014, 04:32 AM)Erthona Wrote: Tom,
I would know nothing about any of that Tom, only you would be looking to get a piece of Tex ass, metaphorically speaking 
. I do like the interlinear rhyme, especially that of "belly" and "Machiavelli". It would have been nice were you able to carry it out in every line, that is the middle with the end rhyme. There are a number of odd puns, which seem mainly for puns sake, which of course I am alright with...mainly 
. Of Cornish the bedlam pun is very good. All in all a nice blended scotch, is this my bottle of JWB?
Dale
Yes...I DO like the historically modified images of stalwarts like Machiavelli and D'annunzio....particularly because they make for tough rhymes!
I am still working on D'annunzio.
Best,
tectak
