Comfort Zone

[Bunx]

Her smile sagged
the same way a crooked
painting forces you to notice it.  I like the imagery it paints a realistic image of a girl
 
I watched her relax while I ate egg salad
and mulled over the days business;
a leaf landed in her hair as she napped
on the bench beneath a nearby oak. again enjoyed the imagery here, I get a feeling of stillness as if the subject is more a passive observer in the day.
 
The air was crisp and her mouth was a kettle at tea time;
I wanted a cup.
 
Lunchtime ended, and I was late getting back to work.

I may be missing a deeper meaning then surface description of this poem. Liked it for what I got from it. Gave me a sense of stillness and peace. The romance is not over the top or over graphic which i think it more sincere and realistic not confusing to the reader.

thanks for the post!