11-08-2014, 08:31 AM
(11-07-2014, 08:47 AM)Erthona Wrote: Keith,Thanks Dale I have made a few changes, it needs to be clear.
The poetry part works OK, but the story telling part has a few holes in it, making it hard to visualize. Cute idea though.
Dale
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