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New to haiku
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11-08-2014, 08:20 AM
(11-08-2014, 07:09 AM)donbouquet Wrote: a haiku attempt:You have the glimpse of a time and place - and an 'aha' moment - even a kigo in there I guess, flowers usually standing for spring. I like the way the focus moves from close-up - the crack, to medium distance - the flower - to wide angle - the traffic |
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New to haiku - by donbouquet - 11-08-2014, 07:09 AM
RE: New to haiku - by SimikPK - 11-08-2014, 08:19 AM
RE: New to haiku - by just mercedes - 11-08-2014, 08:20 AM
RE: New to haiku - by donbouquet - 11-08-2014, 08:48 AM
RE: New to haiku - by billy - 11-08-2014, 03:55 PM
RE: New to haiku - by srijantje - 11-08-2014, 03:59 PM
RE: New to haiku - by donbouquet - 11-08-2014, 10:31 PM
RE: New to haiku - by bena - 11-10-2014, 11:54 PM
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