Starling haiku
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(11-08-2014, 02:05 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  I hate starlings they invade my suet feeders and leave little for the songbirds!
How about:

Starlings
Cherry tree
Shotgun
'Star dust'

If I were to replace the bang it would be shotgun, not airgun. But this way it has the dynamics, having a "shotgun" is too static, haiku needs the twist.
Thistles.
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Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 01:54 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by billy - 11-07-2014, 02:57 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by Magpie - 11-07-2014, 07:36 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by coy - 11-07-2014, 08:02 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 07:31 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by coy - 11-07-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by billy - 11-07-2014, 07:47 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by donbouquet - 11-07-2014, 09:46 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by ellajam - 11-08-2014, 01:29 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by billy - 11-07-2014, 11:16 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by ChristopherSea - 11-08-2014, 02:05 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-08-2014, 03:55 AM



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