11-07-2014, 09:39 PM
the middle one is the best. eliminating the words "geese and" may even make it better - one too many images for a single haiku
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Corn Haiku - by spacecoaster - 11-06-2014, 06:25 AM
RE: Corn Haiku - by Magpie - 11-07-2014, 07:58 AM
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