Robin Redbreast
#6
Posted an edited version.

Thanks to Just Mercedes and Dale for pointing out the awkward lines at the start of the second stanza that needed changing.
Much appreciated.

Mark
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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Robin Redbreast - by Magpie - 10-25-2014, 04:33 AM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by just mercedes - 10-30-2014, 04:28 AM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by Magpie - 11-01-2014, 06:54 PM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by Erthona - 10-30-2014, 07:44 AM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by Magpie - 11-01-2014, 07:01 PM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by Magpie - 11-07-2014, 10:14 AM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by billy - 11-07-2014, 08:00 PM



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