11-07-2014, 01:54 AM
Inspired by starlings in Mrs. Johnosn
Edit1.1
starling
cherry tree
bang
Original:
Starling
on a cherry tree-
airgun blows.
(They are pest here, too). Not sure if the last line wouldn´t work better as "blow of an airgun", but I am afraid it would bee too long compared to the middle one.
Edit1.1
starling
cherry tree
bang
Original:
Starling
on a cherry tree-
airgun blows.
(They are pest here, too). Not sure if the last line wouldn´t work better as "blow of an airgun", but I am afraid it would bee too long compared to the middle one.
Thistles.

