11-06-2014, 05:51 AM
I know this isn't proper feedback but I just love this poem and I had to say so! Aside from what has been mentioned I do not see room for improvement. 
"I asked him for mercy, he gave me a gun"
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RE: Poles - by Requiem - 11-05-2014, 09:11 AM
RE: Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-05-2014, 12:28 PM
RE: Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-06-2014, 04:51 AM
RE: Poles - by spacecoaster - 11-06-2014, 05:51 AM
RE: Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-06-2014, 10:53 AM
RE: Poles - by donbouquet - 11-11-2014, 08:38 AM
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