Tired
#10
I don't think it's a very good poem one way or the other. It's low, too quiet.


who can leave?
The speaker. There's only one speaker. The speaker speaks for the other. At least as far as anyone can tell. 
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Tired - by rowens - 11-04-2014, 01:42 AM
RE: Tired - by Erthona - 11-04-2014, 06:15 AM
RE: Tired - by tectak - 11-04-2014, 06:35 AM
RE: Tired - by brandontoh - 11-04-2014, 12:19 PM
RE: Tired - by ellajam - 11-04-2014, 12:25 PM
RE: Tired - by Todd - 11-04-2014, 01:26 PM
RE: Tired - by rowens - 11-05-2014, 04:39 AM
RE: Tired - by Todd - 11-05-2014, 08:18 AM
RE: Tired - by just mercedes - 11-05-2014, 09:04 AM
RE: Tired - by rowens - 11-06-2014, 12:26 AM
RE: Tired - by just mercedes - 11-06-2014, 04:12 AM
RE: Tired - by rowens - 11-06-2014, 04:34 AM



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