A flower in full bloom
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Thanks for the feedback! There was a typo in the original poem, the second "mortality" should say "mentality." So it should read:

The cause of my mortality
Reveals itself, when applied,
As my own mentality;
And to this, I must subside.

Sorry about that!
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A flower in full bloom - by elegant_hedgehog - 11-02-2014, 11:39 AM
RE: A flower in full bloom - by Brownlie - 11-02-2014, 01:52 PM
RE: A flower in full bloom - by ellajam - 11-02-2014, 09:51 PM
RE: A flower in full bloom - by elegant_hedgehog - 11-03-2014, 01:16 AM
RE: A flower in full bloom - by SimikPK - 11-03-2014, 06:30 AM



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