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A cynic's view on love and bliss
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11-02-2014, 07:14 AM
I love the idea of this poem, and the title, which really grabs your attention. However I was a little confused by the first stanza, and the poem almost lost my interest there. Maybe it could be rephrased or changed around, to be more punchy and really grab the reader's attention, as the other stanzas do?
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A cynic's view on love and bliss - by vanilla - 10-19-2014, 12:55 PM
RE: A cynic's view on love and bliss - by chanchan77 - 10-20-2014, 12:26 PM
RE: A cynic's view on love and bliss - by Glittercake - 10-22-2014, 12:14 AM
RE: A cynic's view on love and bliss - by Todd - 10-22-2014, 03:42 AM
RE: A cynic's view on love and bliss - by Jesstice - 10-22-2014, 04:07 PM
RE: A cynic's view on love and bliss - by billy - 10-22-2014, 06:10 PM
RE: A cynic's view on love and bliss - by charlie142 - 11-02-2014, 07:14 AM
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