how I haiku haibun
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To me, adhering as closely as possible to the classical haiku rules (exluding the original language, of course) was the greatest fun - It was a challenge for me to pack everything required into those three lines. Just adding to the first post, one important thing I guess is the necessary turning point, or contrast (or something even more subtle), which, usually, comes in the last line. Id post one of mine if it wasnt in slovak - the translation would prolly ruin the 575.
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