In The Japanese Garden

[Heyyous]

In The Japanese Garden

Bow-shaped bridge
Red pebble path
Water reflects
Ripples dance // Possibly add as ? I'm new but I think it would flow better.
Enchanting sight // I agree with the others that I should be left to decide if the sight is enchanting
As water flows
Couples unite // this does not add to the image for me and actually bothers me
Aubergine and lime
Moss, bamboo and fern
Maples delicate
Branches thick
Lilies strong as rocks surround
In the Japanese garden we are found

My personal image is absolutely great until I hit that enchanting site line. I was lost in an image sitting on the bridge looking at the red pebble path in the water. Then everything just feels rushed and I do not see the picture anymore. The image does almost come back when you say lilies strong as rocks surround however, This is quite a peaceful thought.