Hollow
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because I am unwilling to make a fool out of myself by giving constructive criticism without first knowing how others view my own work. How could I ever help someone with their own poetry if I do not at least have some form of opinion of my own work from them? Nobody has ever in my entire life commented on my poetry and for all I know I could be completely missing certain elements that dictate a thoughtful and well to the point poem.
So I would love to give feedback just as much as I would love to receive it so we can all grow together, However I am unwilling to share my opinions until I have at least an idea of what I need to work on for myself. Thanks for the reply Smile
If you would like to comment on this poem and then link me to one of yours I would feel morally obliged to return the favor & happily do so.


Messages In This Thread
Hollow - by Heyyous - 11-01-2014, 10:59 PM
RE: Hollow - by ellajam - 11-01-2014, 11:06 PM
RE: Hollow - by Heyyous - 11-01-2014, 11:47 PM
RE: Hollow - by ellajam - 11-02-2014, 12:37 AM
RE: Hollow - by Tiger the Lion - 11-02-2014, 01:11 AM
RE: Hollow - by Heyyous - 11-02-2014, 01:26 AM
RE: Hollow - by billy - 11-02-2014, 03:56 AM



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