11-01-2014, 11:06 PM
Why do you feel you can't read and understand other poster's poems unless they comment on yours first?
You may want to seek out a different site that works that way. The Pig Pen requires you to give before you receive.
Good luck with your writing, ella/mod
You may want to seek out a different site that works that way. The Pig Pen requires you to give before you receive.
Good luck with your writing, ella/mod
(11-01-2014, 10:59 PM)Heyyous Wrote: Hello every, I very much like the idea of giving feedback but cannot give any valuable feedback without first getting a feeling for were my own writings currently stand. So with that said I would like to share with you one of my first peoms, It is not the first one I wrote but I feel I conveyed the idea well, However I feel better words could have been used... So please don't hold back because I hate the idea of wasting my time writing poorly.
Hollow
These words have no meaning
Such emotion cannot be contained within the reading
No matter what I choose to write
The birth of my ideas possible to be viewed like the night
Without the proper perception
These words are hollow without intention
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