I Hate Her:

[SimikPK]

thanks for the feedback Simik, i will give the dogs breed in a quick edit. [i used (pug) as the breed in order to keep it balanced syllable -wise]
thanks


tiger, i only put a title up as an extra line and actually thought about removing it completely. it's not a haiku or senryu so maybe it needs a title, i'm not sure; anyone can feel free to leave suggestions or play witt the wording. or even create a completely different one of their own.

I agree with tiger, the poem is much too great for such a title