Robin Redbreast

[Magpie]

I like this - birds can be very territorial, and never shut up about it - but the first two lines of the second stanza feel weak to me.

Hi JM, thanks for the comments, this was based on an actual encounter with a Robin who eventually became known as Pugnacious, who was indeed very feisty and I'm fairly certain he never went to sleep. Eventually his curiosity got the better of him and he decided that we could become friends and share the garden. 
Point taken about those two lines being weak, I will look at it and post and revised version.

Thanks for reading,

Mark