I Hate Her:

I Hate Her:

Tiger the Lion

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#10

11-01-2014, 01:08 PM

Hi Billy.
The original was clever and snide. Loved it. Well done.
The edit is beautiful. Layered and evocative (without losing clever and snide). Amazing how a sounding board like this forum can transform an idea into a really great piece. So thank you twice. Love it.
If I were to ask a question, I wonder if the poem might have outgrown the title. It felt ideal for the original, but maybe too "small" for the edit.
Paul

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I Hate Her: - by billy - 05-11-2012, 06:04 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by billy - 05-12-2012, 06:02 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by Philatone - 05-12-2012, 07:12 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by abu nuwas - 05-14-2012, 06:48 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by billy - 05-14-2012, 11:07 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by Erthona - 05-14-2012, 07:31 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by billy - 05-15-2012, 05:51 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by stb1931 - 10-31-2014, 07:49 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by SimikPK - 10-31-2014, 10:45 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by Tiger the Lion - 11-01-2014, 01:08 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by billy - 11-01-2014, 07:09 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by SimikPK - 11-01-2014, 08:24 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by vagabond - 11-18-2014, 09:46 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by paranoid marvin - 11-19-2014, 08:08 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by billy - 11-19-2014, 06:27 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by azure - 11-19-2014, 06:31 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by bgre9184 - 12-11-2014, 12:22 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by amiwrite - 12-28-2014, 12:19 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by Voker101 - 12-14-2014, 11:35 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by alatos - 12-24-2014, 03:14 AM

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