10-31-2014, 10:45 PM
billy Wrote:1st edit:The strongest point of this poem is its lenght. That´s what I love about short poems - there is little (but often still much
My dog bit the wife
She might have caught rabies-
I put them both down.
) which can go wrong. The ambiguous "she" in line 2 does all the good work. Using "the wife" instead of "my wife" to me works as a suggestion of the not-so-good relationship with "the wife" and being where it is - end of a line 1, the line being line 1, makes an excellent introduction and interpretation key to the whole poem.
What about naming a specific breed of the dog? It might convey something more, but also could divert the attention from the main (and single) point of the poem. Don´t know, just an idea.stb1931 Wrote:Fantastic!... not the putting down the dog, the poemDo you think it reffered to the dog who was put down? It is edited now, but still.. consider.
Thistles.

