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9.30.14 NY
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10-30-2014, 01:32 PM
Good senryu which, though set in September, the latter margin of summer and beginning of autumn, has a very wintery feel to it. The closing lines make me think of expelled white breath. Thank you for the read
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 09-30-2014, 10:21 PM
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