10-24-2014, 05:54 AM
It is a very sad subject and a tough one to write about. However, I did enjoy it after a few reads. It took a few reads because I felt I missed words, as some of the stanzas had a rhyme and some didn't, so I would go back a read it again. Also I see at times (very few) where punctuation was used and elsewhere it was not, it got confusing to me, so again I would have to go back and reread. As said, over all a sad heartfelt read, thank you.