They're Just Passing Through

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They're Just Passing Through

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10-23-2014, 08:17 PM

Billy,

Thank you so much! That was all really wonderful to hear.

I'll definitely strip the poem down a bit like you recommended-- I generally have problems with excess verbosity.

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They're Just Passing Through - by coolfunboy - 10-23-2014, 06:13 PM

RE: They're Just Passing Through - by billy - 10-23-2014, 08:00 PM

RE: They're Just Passing Through - by coolfunboy - 10-23-2014, 08:17 PM

RE: They're Just Passing Through - by spacecoaster - 10-24-2014, 06:24 AM

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