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[billy]

i like everything about this.  the meter is spot on so are the rhymes. okay cannonball and dock are a bit off but i never noticed they were until i'd had a forth read ( i looking for it)
thanks for the chill

Out of sweat, I swig my beer
and splash another rock;
one last blast of steam to sear
before I splash the dock.
 
Run then jump and cannonball
into the frigid lake;
climb out like an Elmo doll
that smiles and laughs and shakes.