Cycle of flesh

[Jesstice]

Ah- Okay I love the suggestions, thank you. I am eager to see this become complete - how long do people normally take to write poems? ha! Thank you, thank you for the time and edits! Do you think without the last stanza it may seem a little too dark? I just felt I needed to make some happiness or hope of something better.... without it I feel like a bitter atheist - which I love but it's not a true representation of me! Okay I've talked myself out of the last stanza now. Thanks. I will get together another edit -