Lady Liberty's new son

[ruagun]

Lady liberty adopts a son,
The lad embraces opportunity.
Land of liberty belongs to him,
He is beheld by its beauty.
Lady's values shine off him, like a sunny gleam;
He travels forth to toil her soil nice internal rhyme.
And achieve the American dream.

I'll try not to repeat what the two before me already said. I added proper punctuation in bold, this is not a run on sentence. The beginning of every line should not be capitalized unless you are trying to achieve archaic style. I'm going to assume you are, because I personally do not see the American dream as palpable, anymore. For a more original theme, maybe you could make this poem a reminiscence of what the American dream used to be.

Thank you very much for your input.
I am a novice as novice can be.