10-22-2014, 09:11 PM
Billy,
Thank you so much for the thorough critique. I can tell i've joined the right site. This is my first poem and it's my first draft. I wanted to know if I could get any positive feedback - if someone might see something in it. If there is any good in it at all, I will try to push it to the next level. I really appreciate more than anything, your pointing out cliches, because THAT is more irritating to me, the idea of being cliche, than herpes.
Thank you again,
Jess
Thank you so much for the thorough critique. I can tell i've joined the right site. This is my first poem and it's my first draft. I wanted to know if I could get any positive feedback - if someone might see something in it. If there is any good in it at all, I will try to push it to the next level. I really appreciate more than anything, your pointing out cliches, because THAT is more irritating to me, the idea of being cliche, than herpes.
Thank you again,
Jess