10-13-2014, 03:49 AM
It's a great poem, it has a nice flow, I would leave it the ways it is. I like the way it ends. I also think it is a wonderful sentiment that will never happen.
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RE: What have we done.. - by gypsyrose - 10-13-2014, 03:49 AM
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