What have we done..

What have we done..

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10-10-2014, 11:07 AM

I think this is a fantastic poem. As I read it I can definitely hear it being read as slam poetry. It flows really nicely throughout as well. My only recommendation is that you could probably add a concluding line or two.

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What have we done.. - by Ryan_w_r - 10-10-2014, 06:09 AM

RE: What have we done.. - by billy - 10-22-2014, 06:47 PM

RE: What have we done.. - by rayheinrich - 10-25-2014, 12:27 PM

RE: What have we done.. - by Leanne - 10-26-2014, 04:26 AM

RE: What have we done.. - by oceanwanderer20 - 10-10-2014, 11:07 AM

RE: What have we done.. - by Ryan_w_r - 10-11-2014, 01:04 AM

RE: What have we done.. - by Hackbabe2013 - 10-11-2014, 02:36 AM

RE: What have we done.. - by Ryan_w_r - 10-11-2014, 06:17 AM

RE: What have we done.. - by 816270 - 10-11-2014, 12:31 PM

RE: What have we done.. - by gypsyrose - 10-13-2014, 03:49 AM

RE: What have we done.. - by spacecoaster - 10-22-2014, 08:20 AM

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