'ku 9-14 edit

'ku 9-14 edit

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10-17-2014, 09:33 PM

why anything other than October?

October

she falls asleep
praying

(09-15-2014, 12:37 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Potential revision based on comments and rethinking my subject.

anxious October
she falls asleep
praying

Can't seem to take the scissors to this any further. Hmmm

always autumn
she falls asleep
praying

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'ku 9-14 edit - by Tiger the Lion - 09-15-2014, 12:37 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 - by rayheinrich - 09-15-2014, 03:19 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 - by billy - 09-15-2014, 06:25 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 - by Tiger the Lion - 09-15-2014, 07:48 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 - by rayheinrich - 09-16-2014, 03:05 AM

RE: 'ku 9-14 - by Tamara - 09-19-2014, 09:24 AM

RE: 'ku 9-14 edit - by Tiger the Lion - 10-17-2014, 08:40 AM

RE: 'ku 9-14 edit - by bena - 10-17-2014, 09:28 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 edit - by billy - 10-17-2014, 09:33 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 edit - by bena - 10-17-2014, 10:39 PM

RE: 'ku 9-14 edit - by rayheinrich - 10-18-2014, 04:02 AM

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