'ku 9-14 edit

[bena]

to be honest the only thing I'd cut from your rev. ****see below, pls**** is the 'she'---unless you want to keep the entendre of a woman or Autumn....and if that were the case you could still cut she and use falling whichever sounds best to your ear.


bean//melicious one.

PS this comment was when I was half asleep....I was liking the original better (that's why the autumn.)