8am classes really suck

[chris_the_princess]

Rainy mornings, rising sun
Seize the day while it is young

I am merely a beginner in the art of poetry so I feel my word may not be as credible as others, yet I feel that the separation in the first line could have been reiterated in the second by inserting a break. I also agree with rowens. I think that you could have re-written it to be somewhat of a:

Rainy mornings, rising sun
Seize the day, [you're still young/its still young]

I feel the break in between gives it a better flow pattern and a smoother rhythm. Also, maybe expand on the idea. Two lines seems so condensed.