10-16-2014, 01:48 PM
Keith,
Evidently there is an intent to this, as the two stanzas are juxtaposed to one another by the introduction of the "or". The why it is done completely bypasses me. If it is simply a choice, I would choose the first one, as it is a better image than the second one.
Dale
Evidently there is an intent to this, as the two stanzas are juxtaposed to one another by the introduction of the "or". The why it is done completely bypasses me. If it is simply a choice, I would choose the first one, as it is a better image than the second one.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.