10-13-2014, 07:48 PM
way to much i love's for me.
Be loved and love
clean flannel sheets and
and a favorite mug.
the above reads well it gives a happy state of being to the reader and a couple of images that tie in to the happiness.
for me it's almost the complete poem.
you could use the first stanza but any ore overplays the poem.
Be loved and love
clean flannel sheets and
and a favorite mug.
the above reads well it gives a happy state of being to the reader and a couple of images that tie in to the happiness.
for me it's almost the complete poem.
you could use the first stanza but any ore overplays the poem.